Most fiction tales represent a carefully calibrated dance between victory and defeat, success and failure. Too many wins, and the reader grows bored with the lack of challenge. Too many losses, and the reader grows frustrated and disillusioned.

Kiellen achieved her goal here, defeating her rival and claiming her prize. But the battle was not lightly won - her antics have clearly earned her enemies.

Today, you guys get a bonus page! Okay, so it's not much of a bonus page, because it's blank... but I didn't want you to think you were missing out on something ;)


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