This is where we first get to see Kiellen through her own eyes. We've already read about her from one perspective, so it's interesting to see how her sense of self clashes with the way others see here. No spoilers, but it's probably going to be something of a theme :)

Also, I want readers to figure out my world's terminology for themselves in general, but I am interested to know if it's too much. For example, I've introduced two titles here - "Serl" and "Comant." Tell me if you find it confusing, or if it makes sense!

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